Emanhattan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hamburger Moon]

hehehe

that was adorable

[Coming Soon...]

oooo

I saw this was released a few days ago but didnt actually have time to watch it hehe.

Overall everyone did a really nice job on their parts. My favurites being lenko (lmfa the voice acting in yours was great) and cvg´s clips.
I think some of these were very nicelly done and quite funny but the overall presentation of the collab feels sloppy and unfinished. Still it was goodie!

MrScriblam responds:

yea i probably shouldve spent a bit more time putting it together

maybe next time

[WGJ4K: Psychic Surgery]

lmao

def. not amongst your best cartoons but
It keeps its comedic timing constant and I did enjoy the akward silences

[RHG: Vapour vs. Blank]

too short

much like this description, the thing is too short.

some sounds would have been nice too.

[Vete a la Versh 15]

Wow

Al principio puse este review en ingles pero ahora lo pondre en español para que quede completamente claro

hasta ahora vete a la versh solo han sido 15 episodios de exactamente la misma mierda, una caricatura de 30 segundos con un sombreado horrible y personajes que dicen Puta,chingado,pendejo,etcetera en un intento desesperado por ser gracioso y "original" heh. Porque las caricaturas en internet no tienen groserias y penes y otras sandeces.

Creo que vete a la versh, entre otras, es una de las razones por las que la animacion flash mexicana nunca sera completamente respetada como un medio artistico.

translation:

so far vete a la versh has been nothing but 15 episodes of the exact same bullshit, a 30 seconds cartoon with horribly shaded graphics and uninteresting characters who say swear words like pendejo, puta and chingado in a poor atempt to be funny, cool and edgy. Like if the internet wasnt already full of shitty mainstream cartoons full of swear words and dicks and whatever else people of Ng and youtube think its funny.

I think vete a la versh is a perect example of why will flash animation never be respected as an artistic endevior, and why flash animators are not taken seriously in the industry.

horrible graphics, derivative, and REPETITIVE.

Vete a la versh is the new Foamy

Darkar responds:

Aaaaw... pobrecito. Y cómo te sientes al respecto?

[Hector&Virgo: Money Shot]

hahahaha

I love this so much

[Cirque des Enfants]

Strange, never the less charming

I tought it was a nice, simple fantasy/horror story.

I like the whole "squiddlgevission" character designs, fits very well with the music and environment

if anything, the only thing i feel was lacking, was a longer story, a resolution, will the kid forever stay in the cirque des enfants? or will he escape?? A but of a more exact ending would have been pretty good.

Still thats probably not what you were going for cause it seems to me the cartoon mixes a bit of reality with abstraction.

overall

nice :)

[Zelda - Target]

what?

link fires an arrow, misses, hits a chicken.

thats it?

thats the joke?

welp. I cant understand how can stuff like this amuse the people of ng but ok.

You know in the future you might want to add a bit of decent shading instead of randomly adding shadows for "detail".

[You Need A Health Bar!]

hmmmm

I didnt find it funny at all, to be honest
but I was kinda predicting that so mostly I payed more attention on the animation itself.

The first suggestion i could give you is to learn to shade properly. You should use shading to help you sugest shape and depth, not just for the sake of puting a blob of slightly dakened colour in there. I think the easyest example I could give you is the megaman you drew, whose helmet is shaded on the left while the chest has this magical dakened area to the left , and so on. Pick a light source and stick to it. Dont add shadows everywhere just to add "detail". you rather should just not add shadows at all until you learn the basics about it.

Also look ait videos of people running. The part where the scout started to run looked really ugly. it looks like a torso floating. and the legs dont really add up do the effect of the run, nor does it add any weight feel of the run.

in a nutshell, the problem with this cartoon is that it is... well
something a typical newgrounder would make.