Emanhattan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jigsaw]

it was ok

The artwork is very nice and the voices and execution are good too.

But I think the punchline was very disapointing. I tought after he said he was.... you know... after he said that som ething else happens, but no. Its not a joke worthy of so much hours of animation. At least thats what I think :0

Anyway it was very nicelly animated. I hope the leghty script you mentioned has a bit more fun stuff than this one.

I gave a 10 for everything, +1 for not being so funny and for being too short.

good job on the voice acting

squeakytoad responds:

Interesting points, and well stated. Thanks.

(And I think you mean "-1")

[Halloween Run]

My favorite haloween entry this year so far

Congratulations fucks, this was just great!

The idea is very original, and the execution is clean and good. Its cool that you try hard stuff like making an (almost entirely) frame by frame cartoon.

Very nice use of colors, there were some pretty nice backgrounds (except in a scene with a truck, you should revise that) and good animation of the characters walking

This flash was cute and awesome. I voted 5 woth my amazeing voting power of nearly 7 votes!

good job. wish a luck on any future projects : D

Fawx responds:

Thanks Eman the hatman. You're awesome.

[Weak Sleepers]

very nice use of colors

I liked the execution in general. The animaton was pretty fluid and had this... dark atmosphere all the way from start to end, wich is nice. I think this animation is pretty much a picture of what happens in rtil´s mind

my only suggestion would be to work a bit on the characters when you change the camera angle so that they have cohesion from scene to scene. like with the mario hiding from rtil.

cute flash. might not work for people that dont knowabout rtil and egoraptor´s drama, you feel me?

good job. You draw the most disturbing people lauging ever.

Blordow responds:

thanks! and i know what you mean about the characters sorta changing look. but that's my style i think. but ill work on it nonetheless!

[Megaman - Rockin in paper]

very impressive

This was very good. very original idea. I liked it. veery fluid. almost hypnotizing.

[One Big Morphing Orgasm]

ZOMG

we can make reviews in our own movie?

HAHA. IN YOUR FACE NEWGROUNDS

TheBoogley responds:

This sucks, you guys can review it but I can't. I'd give it a two, and say something about NOOBS and Lords of the Gayness, or something. But I don't get to.

[PunWisp vs. JerdanMan]

XD HAHAH.

this is the best flash short factor has by far. it was so fast and random... I laughed my fricken ass off.

The microsoft sam voice was so poorly done and so exagerated it was unreal.

I really liked when one of the characters (punwisp i believe) throwed a poorly drawn buttered toast at jerdanman and jerdan man responded with the most exagerated kamekameha I have ever seen in Ng.

I dont really know whats the point of it, or if it is a satire or whatever. all I know Is I lold like I hadnt done in a while.

Short-Factor responds:

Thanks.
You reversed the characters though. I labeled them in the preloader and I thought the "Punwisp" title turning into Punwisp would be a hint.
Jerdanman is the Mega Man decolor and Punwisp is the inverted Goku.

[A Mushroom!]

lol heh.

It was ok. the joke was a bit overused but Its very nice for a firts submission.

good luck and see you at the zelda collab!

[The Art Show]

very good storytelling

I gave you an 8 for animation because I think the fbf walks were sorta challenging, there was lotsa nicelly animated stuff in it.

However, I simply did not enjoy this flash. I wanted to close it every 5 seconds because I am really not used to this kind of reallly slow-pace story telling.

It honestly does not have a review value... at least for me.

Even tough I didnt like it, I give it an 8 for animation and for the sake of being an "artistic" cartoon. but it honestly is very boring. sorry I guess.

[Megaman bros Xep3-trailer]

you know what I hate?

I hate these kind of people that recieve shitty scores on their submissions the day they send them and then go voting 5 the rest of the year when nobody can see their flashes and then go voting 5 again and again and again. thus getting a very undeserved 4.1 as score trying to make themselves believe they are good.

oficially, this flash didnt pass 3.5 the day it was submitted

how do I know?
http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/8 27807

the quality of the flash is completely throwaway. for starters, get in touch with a decent voice actor

second, that play button is almost invisible with all the shit you put over it. the entire sprite army is over it.

Finally, Do us a favor and get in touch with someone that knows a little english because all these typos are freaking me out. its SHOOT HIM not shot him

Finally, and actually giving a tip to improve, transform all your sprites to gif. because it looks so shitty being all jpegs around. believe me.

I have nothing else to say, the script was something a 10 year old would pull out.

CommanderX responds:

I m not voting for my movies for a long time ( I learned that highter score not help getting more people to watch movie, so I stoped it )

Well, it is true that in the begining I was doing this, but long time ago I stoped it, and the fact that me score did not goes down mean that I not fail to hard with this movie.

I not understant what mean that it did not 3.5 days ?

The true is that I wanted to make better version of this trailer with better animacions, someone was helping me with english, ( I not use voice of actors, I m using voices from game Red faction 2.
Anyway long time ago me windows goes down and I lost all files about this movie and every other so I could not upgrade tham.
About 4 weeks me windows goes down again, and I not can get macromedia flash.

[The halloween commercial]

it was oka for a first try

I think it was pretty much better than anything I made when I was learing flash.

my first sugestion would be to practice putting more frames between the tweens and using more layers when drawing. Take a few tutorials of flash in the tutorial collection, it REALLY helps.

See ya later!

latino-toid responds:

LoL thanks and ill try xdd

And it hard for me to draw the head in flash because for those character i had to start with thoses eyes xdd (Bcause the eyes and the head is in separated layer xd)