Emanhattan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Weak Sleepers]

very nice use of colors

I liked the execution in general. The animaton was pretty fluid and had this... dark atmosphere all the way from start to end, wich is nice. I think this animation is pretty much a picture of what happens in rtil´s mind

my only suggestion would be to work a bit on the characters when you change the camera angle so that they have cohesion from scene to scene. like with the mario hiding from rtil.

cute flash. might not work for people that dont knowabout rtil and egoraptor´s drama, you feel me?

good job. You draw the most disturbing people lauging ever.

Blordow responds:

thanks! and i know what you mean about the characters sorta changing look. but that's my style i think. but ill work on it nonetheless!

[One Big Morphing Orgasm]

ZOMG

we can make reviews in our own movie?

HAHA. IN YOUR FACE NEWGROUNDS

TheBoogley responds:

This sucks, you guys can review it but I can't. I'd give it a two, and say something about NOOBS and Lords of the Gayness, or something. But I don't get to.

[PunWisp vs. JerdanMan]

XD HAHAH.

this is the best flash short factor has by far. it was so fast and random... I laughed my fricken ass off.

The microsoft sam voice was so poorly done and so exagerated it was unreal.

I really liked when one of the characters (punwisp i believe) throwed a poorly drawn buttered toast at jerdanman and jerdan man responded with the most exagerated kamekameha I have ever seen in Ng.

I dont really know whats the point of it, or if it is a satire or whatever. all I know Is I lold like I hadnt done in a while.

Short-Factor responds:

Thanks.
You reversed the characters though. I labeled them in the preloader and I thought the "Punwisp" title turning into Punwisp would be a hint.
Jerdanman is the Mega Man decolor and Punwisp is the inverted Goku.

[Megaman bros Xep3-trailer]

you know what I hate?

I hate these kind of people that recieve shitty scores on their submissions the day they send them and then go voting 5 the rest of the year when nobody can see their flashes and then go voting 5 again and again and again. thus getting a very undeserved 4.1 as score trying to make themselves believe they are good.

oficially, this flash didnt pass 3.5 the day it was submitted

how do I know?
http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/8 27807

the quality of the flash is completely throwaway. for starters, get in touch with a decent voice actor

second, that play button is almost invisible with all the shit you put over it. the entire sprite army is over it.

Finally, Do us a favor and get in touch with someone that knows a little english because all these typos are freaking me out. its SHOOT HIM not shot him

Finally, and actually giving a tip to improve, transform all your sprites to gif. because it looks so shitty being all jpegs around. believe me.

I have nothing else to say, the script was something a 10 year old would pull out.

CommanderX responds:

I m not voting for my movies for a long time ( I learned that highter score not help getting more people to watch movie, so I stoped it )

Well, it is true that in the begining I was doing this, but long time ago I stoped it, and the fact that me score did not goes down mean that I not fail to hard with this movie.

I not understant what mean that it did not 3.5 days ?

The true is that I wanted to make better version of this trailer with better animacions, someone was helping me with english, ( I not use voice of actors, I m using voices from game Red faction 2.
Anyway long time ago me windows goes down and I lost all files about this movie and every other so I could not upgrade tham.
About 4 weeks me windows goes down again, and I not can get macromedia flash.

[The halloween commercial]

it was oka for a first try

I think it was pretty much better than anything I made when I was learing flash.

my first sugestion would be to practice putting more frames between the tweens and using more layers when drawing. Take a few tutorials of flash in the tutorial collection, it REALLY helps.

See ya later!

latino-toid responds:

LoL thanks and ill try xdd

And it hard for me to draw the head in flash because for those character i had to start with thoses eyes xdd (Bcause the eyes and the head is in separated layer xd)

[Sprite A Week: 1]

!!!!!!! >: (

way to resubmitt material, guys!!!!

Khonjin responds:

Can't make sprite a week 2 without sprite a week 1.

[MGS - The Fulp Paradox]

Kickass from start to end.

first of all, really nice using the sounds there lmao. Victor really sounds like snaix.

reallly nice drawing of that jeff bandelin. Hahaha he is so gonna love this one. I have to say I sorta meehehed when I saw the lipsinch, could be imporved because it sorta lags a few seconds. still its very awesome.

Is he really that MUSCULAR :O???

also excelent level of detail there, That reflection of the lens brings the animation a sense of reality most animations cant manage to get.

felicidades por el segundo lugar jeje.en verdad muy chistosa tu animacion jaja.

Osuka responds:

I took the refrenece from hes drawings, that why he looks in that way
Thanks for the review dude ^^

[Credit Crunch]

nicelly animated.... but just that.

I think the animation´s quality its very good. if you can completely try to forget that lazy ass lipsinch wich is not a lipsinch for real. you know what I mean.

nice voice acting, lame thing the script was kinda weak.

still, I think someone might enjoy it more than me.

Wonchop responds:

Heh, I was on a short deadline for this so lipsync had to be sacrificed. I did attempt proper lipsync but it was just looking a bit awkward with the coloured outlines and all.

[Hamal: Demos]

incredibly, this is one man´s work displayed

excelente trabajo oscar.

I like the design of your hamal creature, It would be nice to have a game like you mentioned. well... it has alreayd been done, its called destroy all humans, you are a small alien and have to beat the shit out of everyone, but the game is kinda ironic and comedic. you obviosuly want to give it a more "metal" and "dark" atmosphere, and that I like.

excelent design and use of light sources. I cant imagine all the 0´s and 1´s it takes for that thing to move 1 cm.

Osuka responds:

gracias, quiero darle una atmosfera mucho mas oscura y despiadada, imagina un GTA (la libertad de moverte a donde quieras) + Ninja Gaiden (Movimientos de combate brutales) + Mortal Kombat (Segun Mortal kombat, el cuerpo humano contiene 124.5 litros de sangre)
jajajja