Emanhattan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[what is this i dont even]

hahaha

lmao jordan what the fuck

Short-Factor responds:

emanhotten have my babs

[Mastermind 5]

hahaha

These are always fun to watch. Ive always tought with its red/black colour scheme mastermind was a pretty interesting feast for the eyes. and the voice acting is pretty nice as well.

I really like the minions in this, the have so much personality and its fun how you play around with their uneasyness towards the mastermind.

I really did not see the ending coming wich was really nice.

also wtf the mastermind got fucken tuff I guess he took a lot of steroids after mastermind 4.

The-Swain responds:

He was pretty big in 4, too. I think he first started getting muscley in MM2, when I threw in that side view of him. Until then I wasn't sure what he looked like.

Really though, I think his head is just smaller. A lot smaller.

['The Cosmic Fork']

oooooo

very weird, but interesting animation. i tought it had a nice, simple story. But I feel that so many lines and fuzzyness in general is not easy on the eyes. theres almost too much noise in there.

still an ok carton

Butzbo responds:

Yyes i went for the fuzzyness aiming for an extremely chaotic ambience, but maybe i overdid that,hhuh-huh.
Thanks for the feedback!

[The Kirby Collab]

hmmmm

its a bit too derivative. The sprite parts somehow felt really old. some of them remind me more of what kirby sprite animations were like in 2005 than they do about the game itself.

Someone in the collab used vector drawings in his sprite skit and it didnt look very nice. I think the general problem with all of the parts, and the most noticeable one, is that most of the shading is way off. You guys should avoid adding "light sources" and "shadows" for the sake of adding detail.

A tip that you will all find really useful in a near future: what you are looking for is not more detail, but more accuracy.

I did not find it particularly funny but im simply not that much into kirby I guess.
I think ikools part was the most nicelly done

yep

FlashfireEX responds:

I don't know what you mean by old. The shading is a bit off, yes but we were all focusing a lot more on the animation and comedy than the details. If you're not really into Kirby you're probably not gonna laugh at the jokes. That's just how it is.

[Coming Soon...]

oooo

I saw this was released a few days ago but didnt actually have time to watch it hehe.

Overall everyone did a really nice job on their parts. My favurites being lenko (lmfa the voice acting in yours was great) and cvg´s clips.
I think some of these were very nicelly done and quite funny but the overall presentation of the collab feels sloppy and unfinished. Still it was goodie!

MrScriblam responds:

yea i probably shouldve spent a bit more time putting it together

maybe next time

[SkoolCool's DemoReel 2010]

No esta mal!

hay muchas animacioncillas buenas en esto y hay mucha variedad, lo cual es una cosa muy buena.

Lo unico que siento que falta en este demo reel, hablando asi mas un poco mas uhuhm gei profesionalmente es que falta algun tipo de animacion que demuestre fuerza y el peso en los personajes. hay un(os) walk cycle(s) que pusiste ahi en los que el personaje como que se desliza mucho. No se "siente" lo suficiente el contacto que el monito hace con el piso.

Mucha de la animación ahi esta bien pero es mucho fbf mas "experimental...?" Tienes unos ahi que son medio tirandole a la catoblepas.
creo que lo senti asi porque los cuerpos de muchos de tus personajes aqui vistos de repente se deforman, trabaja un poco mas en la consistencia de sus cuerpos.

Las tomas de perspectiva se ven chidillas, pero tienen algunos (menores) hipos que podrias corregir en futuras animaciones, la mas notoria es una que pusiste en la que una llanta de un carro no se ve lo suficientemente alineada con la cubierta y como que le quita vida a la caricatura. Hay otra (vi el demo reel 2 veces) en la que un monito como que se sube a una silla en forma acrobatica, y luego se baja de la silla y sale por una puerta, pero sus pies magicamente estan por encima de la silla mientras que el sale de la habitacion.

De todo el demo reel, creo que el mejor bit es el del tipo comiendo lasaña.
Por otro lado tu fbf es bastante consistente asi que sabes que vas por buen camino :=)

p.s. lol me gusta tu intro con el logo. Es simple, pero hace el trabajo.

SkoolCool responds:

Muchas gracias por tomarte el tiempo de ver el reel y dejar un review constructivo Emanhattan, se aprecia mucho! Estoy totalmente de acuerdo en todo lo que dijiste, y pienso tomar muy en cuenta los comentarios.
Hare ejercicios de peso y varios walk cycles para que se vea mas de adeveras, digamos. Lo que mencionas del tipo que salta en la silla y la pata esta por delante envez de atrás, fue una patinada espantosa y alguna revolvida extraña con las capas. No me había dado cuenta pero lo corregire. Y realmente me alegra decir que los bits que más "criticaste" son realmente los mas antiguos (el del coche y la llanta es de 2008, por ejemplo) asi que si he ido mejorando a lo largo del tiempo (el de la lasaña es practicamente el más reciente de todos).
Gracias otra vez por el review, lo tendré muy presente. Saludos!

[Vete a la Versh 15]

Wow

Al principio puse este review en ingles pero ahora lo pondre en español para que quede completamente claro

hasta ahora vete a la versh solo han sido 15 episodios de exactamente la misma mierda, una caricatura de 30 segundos con un sombreado horrible y personajes que dicen Puta,chingado,pendejo,etcetera en un intento desesperado por ser gracioso y "original" heh. Porque las caricaturas en internet no tienen groserias y penes y otras sandeces.

Creo que vete a la versh, entre otras, es una de las razones por las que la animacion flash mexicana nunca sera completamente respetada como un medio artistico.

translation:

so far vete a la versh has been nothing but 15 episodes of the exact same bullshit, a 30 seconds cartoon with horribly shaded graphics and uninteresting characters who say swear words like pendejo, puta and chingado in a poor atempt to be funny, cool and edgy. Like if the internet wasnt already full of shitty mainstream cartoons full of swear words and dicks and whatever else people of Ng and youtube think its funny.

I think vete a la versh is a perect example of why will flash animation never be respected as an artistic endevior, and why flash animators are not taken seriously in the industry.

horrible graphics, derivative, and REPETITIVE.

Vete a la versh is the new Foamy

Darkar responds:

Aaaaw... pobrecito. Y cómo te sientes al respecto?

[Great Destiny Man]

lmfao

That was pretty silly as usual!

Sexual-Lobster responds:

yeh i guess so, who likes serious stuff though? what, everyone? oh...

[Learn 2 Read]

lol :D

i like the morphing in this

your lipsinch has improved significantly

Oney responds:

thank you papa

[Thomas the elf]

HAHAHAHA

pixie acuatico es mi fuente favorita de swfs.

peixeaquatico responds:

yeah thanks Emanhattan

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