Score: 2

"you know what I hate?"

submission: Megaman bros Xep3-trailer

date: October 20, 2008

I hate these kind of people that recieve shitty scores on their submissions the day they send them and then go voting 5 the rest of the year when nobody can see their flashes and then go voting 5 again and again and again. thus getting a very undeserved 4.1 as score trying to make themselves believe they are good.

oficially, this flash didnt pass 3.5 the day it was submitted

how do I know?
http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/8 27807

the quality of the flash is completely throwaway. for starters, get in touch with a decent voice actor

second, that play button is almost invisible with all the shit you put over it. the entire sprite army is over it.

Finally, Do us a favor and get in touch with someone that knows a little english because all these typos are freaking me out. its SHOOT HIM not shot him

Finally, and actually giving a tip to improve, transform all your sprites to gif. because it looks so shitty being all jpegs around. believe me.

I have nothing else to say, the script was something a 10 year old would pull out.

Score: 8

"what can I say...."

submission: Super Smash Bros ST 6

date: October 19, 2008

the quality of the production in general is very good. It is very nicelly animated for a sprite movie, even tough I know it is actually quite simple I found it very nicelly done.

What I dont.... you know.. really like aout the series is that it is very stereotypical. How many sprite fights do we have around??? I think that, honestly, it is easyer to animate the "fast sprite fight" because you can go all fast , making a few tweens and color gradients to refelect this velocity and Dbz-like action and people wont notice small mistakes if you fuck up here and there.
Never being a fan of dbz stylish fights I dont really relate to this movie... but hey Im sure some people around will like it.

Nice sprite artwork here and there tough. not one of my favorite flashes but worth watching.

My only suggestion would be (since I know you can draw already) to... create a less stereotypical storyline or something because I have seen this a lot of times before.

Score: 8

"it was oka for a first try"

submission: The halloween comercial

date: October 18, 2008

I think it was pretty much better than anything I made when I was learing flash.

my first sugestion would be to practice putting more frames between the tweens and using more layers when drawing. Take a few tutorials of flash in the tutorial collection, it REALLY helps.

See ya later!

Score: 10

"Nice job ya!"

submission: Sonic Vs. Shadow

date: October 15, 2008

I loved it. very nicelly animated for a sprite fight. I like that yoshi´s island take. Very loyal to the game.

Good job!

Score: 10

"lmao"

submission: John McCain

date: October 15, 2008

Very nice video. very nicelly animated. and with no union to reallity witch I love

Score: 10

"LMAO"

submission: SMG Party Boy

date: October 15, 2008

LMAO PARTY BOY HAHAHAH

Score: 3

"Weebl gives a step back"

submission: Brazil

date: October 15, 2008

The first loops that weebl and his crew made were all great! I loved them, but they are now just making these horrible remakes of the badger badger thing.

The most epic submission I have ever seen by you people was PORK. since pork, almost nothing good has came out.

This particular video is in my opinion, no offense, the WORSE weebls stuff video I have ever been, its not even catchy, its just annoying and the lyrics are extremely foced and unfunny.

animation was more less good, you have better than this.

Im sorry, In a scale from 1 to 10, pork being 10, this gets about a 3.

Score: 10

"lmao"

submission: Link the Stink

date: October 14, 2008

doctor seuzz anybody?

Score: 7

"hmmmm"

submission: Super Sprite Shorts Vol 2

date: October 13, 2008

I think the quality of the production its superb.... but its Not funny!! :(

Why did you make a "its been a hard days night" scene...they are so... lame when copied like that.

It was stereotypical and short. but hey you are learning flash so....

Score: 1

"well...."

submission: ParodyRangersTheMovie 1-1

date: October 10, 2008

I dont understand it... Its not funny at all.....

The lines were very monologue-like... with punchlines I FEEL like they are punchlines but do not make me laugh... and makes the joke looked extremely forced.... what happened to the script? Its just some more swearing and speaking really loud and fast wich I dont even know what is funny about.

It looks like you were trying to make the "funny voice acting" the source of the lols in the movie, still, the voices are not funny because they simply dont sound realistic enough. even for a cartoon, they simply dont reflect any emotion, irony or funnny atmosphere, it looks like the voice actors tried too hard to make the voice funny..,, wich is something you dont want the expectators to notice about.

The voice acting, like I just said, was really loud sometimes, really fast most of the time with references to the same cartoon and some overused jokes worthy of the old episodes of the simpsons.

As for the animation, I could start by saying something, frame by frame animation can be extremely lazy and overrated, just like in this case. when the chatracters have no constant proportion or light source it is pretty damn easy to make 3 frames of fbf movement and you got a completelly new position made in a couple of frames.

Also, and this Is somehting I am gonna be a bit criticall about....The lipsinch is NOT a butterfly flying over the character´s face like it looks here. altogh precise, it looks too damn loose. If you see yourself in the mirror you will notice you have a chin and that it moves DOWN AND UP when you speak too.

the characters walking looked simply horrible.... you should try harder to make the angles look good considering you have so much space to work in.